Tuesday, April 29, 2014

The merchant of Venice/ malina

            To many people money is everything for them. It is true that money offers you a large amount of power and anything you desire, but money can not buy you happiness. In the book " The Merchant Of Venice " by shakespeare a man name shylock shows that money is all he worries about and is known as the " villain " in this book.
           Shylock is a selfish and stubborn man, Espically to his daughter named Jessica. Shylock, being a Jewish man is against Jessica being in love with a Christian man. When shylock finds out Jessica runs away with Lorenzo  he seems to be more worried about the gold Jessica stole rather then his own daughter. " I wish my daughter were dead at my feet and the ducats in her coffin! " ( 3.1.75) This shows that shylock is more concerned about his money then his daughter running away.
             When shylock gives a loan to Antonio he asks for a pound of Antonio's flesh as a guarantee to close the deal. " I'll have my bond;  speak not against my bond!" ( 3.15) This proves that shylock is furious about Antonio not being able to pay him back and that he needs his money.  " wouldn't any man want to kill the thing he hates." (4.1.67) This showes that shylock gives no pity about taking a pound of flesh from Antonio even if that means killing him also. He only cares about receiving his money.
          Throughout the book we also learn that shylock isn't only selfish, but he is also very judgmental.  " I hate him because he is a Christian. " He has no respect towards Christians and is a victim for racism. Shylocks attitude makes him look like the bad person in this book, he doesn't approve of his daughter being in love with a Christian. " I've lost a father and you've lost a daughter " ( 2.5.55)  Because of Shylocks strong hate towards Christians Jessica wants to run away from her father to be with Lorenzo. This shows that maybe Jessica is embarrassed  by the way her father treats Christians which is why Jessica doesn't want to be a Jew, she wants to be a Christian.
            Shylock has built his entire life around money and himself, he has many negative characteristics. This caused shylock to be left with nothing.  He lost his daughter, humiliated in court, and most importantly he lost his wealth. This book " The Merchant Of Venice " shows that if you only care about money, you may become greedy and selfish. Money plays a very important role in some peoples life's and can change there attitude or how they are. This will not make you a happy person it will only make a broken.

2 comments:

  1. mS(3)YOUR INTRODUCTION COULD BE A LOT STRONGER, TRY TO EXPLAIN MORE AND PROVIDE A BIT MORE SUMMARY ON THE PLAY. ALSO THE THESIS NEEDS TO BE STRONGER IN TERMS OF ACTUALLY STATING WHO THE CHARACTER CHOSEN IS IN TERMS PERSONALITY AND CHARACTER TRAITS. PLEASE ALSO MAKE SURE THAT IN THE BODY PARAGRAPHS YOU MAKE THE CONNECTION BETWEEN STORY AND THE CHARACTER BY DISCUSSING WHAT CERTAIN EVENTS SHOW ABOUT THE CHARACTER CHOSE.

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  2. The essay was very good. I just felt like you could add a lot more detail and go deep into the topic you are talking about. You have good points just have to give more reasoning :) good job though

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